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Konoha High contest entry by ~KibasSweetheart:iconKibasSweetheart:



     Everyone started to show up. I looked around seeing that EVERYONE was there. Danni, Neji, Tenten, Jen, Lee, Sakura, Ino, Choji, Ally, Shikamaru, Tai, Mayu, Kiba and I.  
     “I hope Naruto’s ok, I’m so worried” Ally stated
     “Why worry, the baka ran away, not my problem” Neji replied. I did sort of agree with Neji. I mean Naruto did run away, but it was sort of Neji’s fault.
      “YOU DICK, if it wasn’t for the stupid Hyuuga’s being such snobs this wouldn’t of happened!” Ino shouted at Neji. I can’t believe that pig had the nerve to yell at Neji.
     “Hey Neji was following orders and being respectful, I blame Hinata, she broke his heart” Tenten screamed back.
     “Don’t blame Hinata!” Kiba yelled.
     “Don’t blame Neji!!” I yelled back
     “Why not he caused this!” Ino screamed back
     That was it; I had finally had enough of Ino’s lack of respect. “Shut up pig and learn some respect.” I said firmly.
     Then Kiba turned to me. “Marlee how you can side with your brother you even said he was wrong yesterday” Kiba asked.
     I looked at him, shock painted over my face. “Kiba…I thought you were my boyfriend, I thought you supported me?”
     “I am but Neji’s being a dick, Hinata doesn’t deserve that.” Could he hear the words that were coming out of his mouth?
     “Oh so Hinata’s more important?!” I asked appalled by what he just said.
     “Stop being troublesome all of you” Shikamaru said sleepily
     “Shikamaru stay out of this!” Ino replied
     “Marlee, Hinata’s one of my best friends.” Kiba said as he tried wrap his arms around me. I couldn’t believe he had the nerve to try and touch me.
     “DON’T TOUCH ME!!” I screamed as a jerked away from him and stormed off.
     I could feel the rage filled tears almost spilling over the edge. I could hear everyone arguing behind me but I didn’t care. I was upset and I wanted someone to comfort me, but I didn’t know who. I started to get the feeling that Kiba liked Hinata more them me. Shut up, I told myself, Kiba loves me, he always had and he always will. But as I replayed the words he said in my head over and over, it really did seem like he liked Hinata more then I. The tears were now spilling down my face and I tried to stop them by quickly wiping my face. I needed to get a hold of myself, its no big deal right? He just likes someone else, I could find someone else. Who am I kidding, of course it’s a big deal, I mean Kiba was like my soul mate, I have only loved him, but then again I wasn’t really looking since I had everything I wanted right in front of me. It made me very upset to think that I was boring him and that he liked my cousin more then me. I guess if he wanted to move on I couldn’t do anything about it.
     I heard Danni scream something and everyone went quiet, I guess I should go back.
     I went and stood beside Jen who was the furthest away from Kiba, I saw him glance in my direction but I didn’t return it.
     Danni and Mayu split us up into teams; I was extremely relived when she put me with Jen and Mayu. But when she put Kiba into his team, paranoia swept over me again. She put him with Hinata. Stop thinking like that! I ordered myself, right now we had to find Naruto. I told myself that I had to concentrate on that and worry about my love life later.
     Jen, Mayu and I had to look over at the east and north house district. We could find any trace of Naruto being there. Suddenly Hinata disappeared from the crowed of worried teenagers.
     For a while everyone stood and talked about the possibilities of where Naruto could be.
     “Hey I heard something over there!” Tenten shouted. Everyone rushed over to the spot to see Hinata and Naruto hugging.
     “Awwwe” they all said.
     Hinata and Naruto let go of each other and gave everyone his famous smile.
      “Hinata your father-“Neji began     
     “Shut up Neji” Mayu said kicking him where the sun doesn’t shine.
     Neji fell to the ground and everyone but me walked over to Hinata and Naruto. I went and helped Neji up. I began to think; if Naruto and Hinata could fix there relationship then so could Kiba and I. But Naruto didn’t have to deal with Hinata liking someone else.
     Everyone was asking them all sorts of questions while I was lost in my own thoughts.
     “I’m sure everyone is worried we should head home.” Danni said. Everyone agreed. I headed home alone, ready for the paranoia to take over me.
     That drama was over, and my own just beginning…
©2008-2009 ~KibasSweetheart
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this is for DjDanniCalifornia's Konoha High contest, its Marlee's version of chapter 8 when Naruto went missing
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That....was...AMAZING!

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AVATAR BASE BY lizbot
lol you really think soo?

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[ Before I die ] I will have seen it all ; ; [ the mountians I have climb ] Now watch me take the fall ;; Oh the webs you weave, we are caught in the fame.
yes i really really like it

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AVATAR BASE BY lizbot
why thanks you, i was very inspired when i wrote it

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[ Before I die ] I will have seen it all ; ; [ the mountians I have climb ] Now watch me take the fall ;; Oh the webs you weave, we are caught in the fame.
nice story ^^

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Friendship isn't about how often you're together with them

But, how often you think about them
lol thanks, i took me a while, i had writers block alot

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[ Before I die ] I will have seen it all ; ; [ the mountians I have climb ] Now watch me take the fall ;; Oh the webs you weave, we are caught in the fame.
really? not seen like you have writer block ^^

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Friendship isn't about how often you're together with them

But, how often you think about them
lol well thats cuz when i got an idea i made sure it was a good one

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[ Before I die ] I will have seen it all ; ; [ the mountians I have climb ] Now watch me take the fall ;; Oh the webs you weave, we are caught in the fame.
lol ^^

and sorry for the late reply. My internet goes down these days -_-

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Friendship isn't about how often you're together with them

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